This is neat! The art's wonderful, and I like the writing, too! I'm not much of a visual novel guy, but I enjoyed it!
The one critique I'd give, though, is that I kinda wish there was a back button to read old text. Sometimes, my finger jitters, and I double click, missing something...
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This is neat! The art's wonderful, and I like the writing, too! I'm not much of a visual novel guy, but I enjoyed it!
The one critique I'd give, though, is that I kinda wish there was a back button to read old text. Sometimes, my finger jitters, and I double click, missing something...
It's still good, though!
Thank you for the review and critique! We'll keep that in mind for the next update!